tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-726484495782035142.post469919799562942922..comments2024-03-29T02:47:44.652-05:00Comments on Future War Stories: FWS Flash Fiction Serial: Empty Places- Part Four: "Meatgrinder"Williamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17218428427067689631noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-726484495782035142.post-25836260435165641192015-09-20T16:12:06.496-05:002015-09-20T16:12:06.496-05:00Though this is a fantastic work, it is full of gra...Though this is a fantastic work, it is full of grammar mistakes. You have been using you're (You are) in the place of your. But overall a fantastic and intriguing story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-726484495782035142.post-1108675535853809382011-10-22T20:51:46.904-05:002011-10-22T20:51:46.904-05:00Don't worry, the Scots, who are based on two v...Don't worry, the Scots, who are based on two video game characters, will be back! I wasn't as happy with this one as others, (the story is mostly done), but I needed to get some information out there and it had been done. The next installment, "The Woods", is all action,and the PLC-3 gets its first combat scenes!<br />Thanks for reading. More in about two weeks!Williamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17218428427067689631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-726484495782035142.post-69592770646929159382011-10-20T16:27:38.493-05:002011-10-20T16:27:38.493-05:00I like the rope-trees!! Hope we get to see some o...I like the rope-trees!! Hope we get to see some of Abaddon's local fauna as well. I can't help but think that dangerous predators might lurk down on the ground levels. In our terrestrial rainforests, some animals- like monkeys- live in trees to avoid predators on the ground.<br /><br />I like having two suns represent the power settings on the PLC-3. Laser rifle troopers deliver large amounts of coherent, directed sunshine- plenty of sunshine. Look forward to seeing the laser weapons used against the Syncs...<br /><br />I note they still have AK-47's on Earth. Those things are probably going to be around even after we are gone. Simple, easy to use, built to last- weapons don't have to be complex to be effective. Not much use against a Synch, however.<br /><br />How dare the Scot mock my laser guns!!! Primitive projectile weapons won't even dent an advanced alien's armor. I'm sure he'll be eating his words- well I guess he could always use a Gauss gun. That needs batteries too.<br /><br />I look forward to Sandoval's continued adventures. Keep it up!!<br /><br />Christopher PhoenixAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com